I'm intrigued by what Edward has in mind for Elizabeth and AJ. I also love how liberated Elizabeth feels at the end of chapter 3 - that particular period in her character's history was such a low point, so it felt really good to see her triumph over all of it. I mean, I still want her with Jason of course, but he's got a long way to go before he is worthy. But that is such a big part of why he can't allow himself to dream of the perfect life with Elizabeth - he is always punishing himself and living for Sonny and Carly instead of himself.
What a great story! I'm also glad you posted all three chapters (and that someone gave it a bump) since this is my first reading of them. Thanks!















