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Entrapment - Prologue - Chapter 2 (PG-13)

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RainStormRaider	Re: Entrapment - Chapter 2 (R)	#41	[url]	[-]
Posts: 106 10/19/08 4:46 PM	lovetoloveyou0 wrote: My first thought was call Jason, but then I said to hell with him cutting my girl out of his life. I'm thinking Elizabeth should go undercover for the F.B.I./Homeland Security and take Karpov down. She should contact Diane and have her broker a deal for her all the while keeping Jason in the dark. With this deal maybe she can find away to help Steven and Sarah, since it seem like all the Webber kids are in danger from the Russians mob boss. Can't way to read more, please update soon. What she said!!! AWESOME story!!!
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morgan18	Re: Entrapment - Chapter 2 (R)	#42	[url]	[-]
Posts: 59 10/19/08 7:58 PM	This is really good. I can't wait to see what happens next, great chapter.
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ghlover0508	Re: Entrapment - Chapter 2 (R)	#43	[url]	[-]
Posts: 1321 10/19/08 11:37 PM	I was really hoping she would dial Jason and then slip the phone in her pocket...although he did hang up the last time she called...maybe she should put Spinelli on her speed dial. I would love the have him help her and then have Jason feel like a complete jerk for leaving her and the boys totally unprotected. The Jackal could start to save the day...Lizzie and the Jackal!!! Karpov definately scares me and what will he want her to do....so glad the kiddos let you write for awhile...I know that kids don't like to let the adults in their lives do anything without them!
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realitycheck	Re: Entrapment - Chapter 2 (R)	#44	[url]	[-]
Posts: 239 10/23/08 3:30 PM	After reading some of the other comments, I agree I think she should go it alone, ask Diane for help or even contact Max or Milo on the sly to help her. Definitely keep Jason out of the loop. If she can keep her fear under control, I think she can get the upper hand on Karpov. There's always Nicholas. Thanks for the update.
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jackal1973	Re: Entrapment - Chapter 2 (R)	#45	[url]	[-]
Posts: 3426 10/23/08 4:26 PM	It was ironic that their bond had survived hatred, but not love. Oh, I just loved that line. Another fabulous update. The way you are branching out to her family members and giving Karpov depth is so nice. And whether she trudges on alone or tries to call Jason again...I can't wait to see what you do next.
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