I just caught up with this fic! Shhh, don't tell my readers I was reading instead of writing...

That said, I'm going to respond to the fic as a whole up to this point. The addition of a son, Sean, for Elizabeth and Jason took be, a bit, by surprise. I like that although Jason isn't with him Sean has a strong attachment to his father and a healthy respect for him. I love that all the boys know who their Dad is and that they are part of the Q family. Harry wielding Edward's illegal dealings over him like the Sword of Damocles I find more than a little satisfying -- kudos to you on that one, too.

I never really like fics that make Carly the total bitch -- but I do like that, in this fic, Jason is not totally involved in her and her needs to the destruction of his own. I also like that Jason has his own network in place to meet the needs of his family. Love that.

You're doing a really nice job on this story and I'm a little anxious to see where this is going to go. Who could be stalking Liz? I'm betting it's more personal than business related. I can't wait for you to get back to that part of the story and let us in on the who and the why.

Thanks for an very enjoyable read,
Lisa